In Progress?

**Shinryu**

Just a little something I've been working on... I'm still not sure I'm done with it, but here you go anyway. Of course, thanks to photobucket limitations, it's only 800x600 and not at the best quality level.

**MxO-Insertion**

O.o I like the pose, but it looks like it was made in MS paint... (Not saying its bad, but the odd bold black brushes remind me of MS SMILEY

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HostileIntention

Nicely executed.

**MxO-PhanthomZtryker**

The only flaw is that I don't really care for the code itself.
It's pretty bland and I'm sure you could have gotten a better quality shot of it.

However!
It's so nicely put together that it's worth it in my opinion.
Very well done. SMILEY

**MxOElliMann**

MxO-Insertion wrote:

O.o I like the pose, but it looks like it was made in MS paint... (Not saying its bad, but the odd bold black brushes remind me of MS )

That's probably photobuckets fault. Poor quality...

But i think the pic was very kewl though. 'specially the fact that the code kinda goes infront and behind him and all that. Very kewl indeed.

**Shinryu**

Yeah, the code's the part that I really am not to too thrilled about myself... if I go back and work on anything in particular, it will be the code rain. But thanks for the comments, and keep 'em coming SMILEY

Sykin

Excellent composition. What did you do--merge quite a few shots of your RSI into one? I've always wanted to try that, and the pose you achieved here is awesome.

If you did this in Photoshop, may I suggest a different kind of code? There's quite a few screenshots of some out there and it is possible to duplicate it with the code font.

Also, try using imageshack to host pictures. Or even thex.fm; they provide you with some nice file hosting.

**Trax**

A) Use more high def code
B) Blend the shoulder blades together more, it looks like your joints have popped out

But apart from that, looks very nice.

**bannanaphone**

Trax wrote:

Blend the shoulder blades together more, it looks like your joints have popped out

for some reason firing two sub machine guns from that position at the same time seems to me like it could cause shoulder pain/injury SMILEY

**Shinryu** · 11/23/2006 14:37:58

Insertion: Not sure what you mean about the black brushes... can you explain that a little further?

Sykin: Yeah, it was a bit of cut and paste using a few different screens I had taken... I even tried it with my head tilted back (thanks /drinkbottle and /takepill lol) but those didn't really look as good as the turned head.. plus, this shows off the earpiece and shades which I consider important seeing as how I've always been a dedicated Machinist.

Trax and Bannanaphone: Hehehhe.. ouch. I was thinking the shoulders did stand out a little much... and actually firing from that position for real indeed might not be the best idea.

... now I need to find time to work on getting better looking code rain. Thanks to odj's tutorial, I hope I can get that done. Thankfully once I get that done it should be easy to reassemble everything (yay for layers lol).

**bannanaphone**

i thought the shoulders looked good! SMILEY

^.^

and don't forget, "there is no shoulder" :p
still... he might not be shooting? maybe just threatening? SMILEY